You might be surprised. I felt like the Comma Nazi after a while. Then I went through some introspective "Is it just me? Am I too fond of commas?" thing. But, after a while, I figured that if you didn't like my suggestions, you wouldn't change them. I was just trying to correct some of the sentences that seemed to have too many "and"s in them and didn't flow right. Stuff like that.

I should tell you that I did really like it. It's not really my kind of story, but it totally held my interest. I'll have to read it again though, when I can really enjoy it, rather than carefully examine sentences to make sure I wasn't missing things. That kind of took some of the enjoyment out of it.